Everybody wants to be loved because they need to feel it. Winning some boys‘ heart is very hard. Men try to win girls’ heart with some tricks and girls can give their hearts. There are some steps to win a girl‘s heart for example , such as being goodlooking, being rich, and being educated.
Girls’ Heart
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The second sentence spoils the cohesion of the paragraph.It should be either omitted or something should be added after it.